I press play on Odeal and he said,
“They said there’s no rest for the wicked,”
right when you took me all the way in,
eyes locked, breath shaking,
that look like you were stealing something sacred from me.
Baby… you the wickedest.
You laid back and I told you I love the bird’s-eye view,
the way surrender looks powerful on you.
My hand found your neck,
not control, just connection,
the only time I ever place my hands on you
is when I’m making love to you…
and you know the difference.
You don’t just touch me,
you take pieces.
Slow.
Intentional.
Like you’ve been here before in another life
and came back to finish the job.
You move like a secret I shouldn’t tell,
like sin dressed in softness,
like pleasure with a pulse.
Every sound you make rewrites my focus,
every pause feels like you teasing my soul on purpose.
You’re not aggressive,
you’re inevitable.
A quiet demon with good intentions
and bad influence.
That makes a man forget
he ever planned on leaving.
I try to keep my composure
but you don’t allow that.
You study me.
Learn me.
Pull reactions out of me
I didn’t give permission for.
You don’t rush,
you take your time like you own it,
like you know I’m not going anywhere,
like this moment is yours
and I’m just lucky to be inside it. Baby.. You show out,
This is why they warned me about you.
Not because you’re dangerous,
but because you’re addictive,
You don’t just please me…
you pull me under,
Have me questioning how deep this goes,
how far I’m willing to follow,
how much of myself I’m willing to lose
just to feel you again.
And the wild part?
You don’t even finish me here.
You stop…
smile…
leave me suspended.
Like you already know
this isn’t the ending
and every swallow equals a inch of my soul belongs to you,
This is just the part
where I realize
I’m not ready to be saved yet.
Pt. 5 coming…
The Finale. The Happy Ending.
And baby,
we both know
wicked stories don’t end softly.
Just know we supporting from Ghana 🙌🏾
Brotha, you know it’s a hit when MF’s at Trapeze reading your shit. These women ready to fine you 😂
THIS RIGHT HERE?? This is why women call you dangerous.😈💦
I like to hear how you whisper to the pussy baby 🫗
“Every time you drop one… I gotta regroup. This is demon-time poetry.” 😮💨🔥
You the type that’ll have women lust so much, that’ll eat coochie with you. I one of them 🤤😝
Baby.. You know why we here and you..came..through.. 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Please read dm smighlee, my husband and I would like to have a conversation, maybe meet for a drink.
Lock in with me kmbkouture, had everyone at Trapeze locked in 💦💦💦🤤
I love when you talk to me, I’ve begged for this but love, don’t make pt 5 the finale, hoping it just the title.
This series shouldn’t be this damn addicting, I’ve been so invested and I have not seen a bad comment yet.
Hey hun, enjoy all of your poetry, especially this series 💦🤤
I just want to know do your mother know you write like this? 😂
Sir, when this came out.. Went straight to the ladies group chat. You have us so invested 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
The horns on her head says you painting her as your demon, am I correct?
Boy… the way you paint scenes.. I’m blushing and reading at the same time. 👀❤️🔥
Baby you the wickedest’… yeah you lost me right there. Instant classic. 📝🔥
Your vision is made crazy when creating, you really paint a picture
You don’t just touch me,
you take pieces.
Slow.
Intentional.
Like you’ve been here before in another life
and came back to finish the job.
The shit that went through my mind reading this paragraph.
Only if we were able to see pictures on profiles, I would holla at some women like it’s social media.
Not me rereading it trying to picture the birds-eye view part 😭🔥
Being your girls isn’t for the weak, I would read these comments and make you delete all this shit, even the site. Because wtf you need them read your poetry, write it for me. 😂 Love reading your comments tho.
Is this reality, loosely based or fictional? Your mind is so creative, makes me want to experience you personally
Oh my, the switch up is 🔥🔥
The visuals… the tension… the dominance… please. I need Part 5 NOW. 😩🔥
You didn’t write a poem… you opened a portal. Pt 4 is pure wickedness. 🔥📖
Came across your poetry after you reposted my video on IG. From creator to creator, respect black man. ✊🏾
🔥 “Nahhh this man writing spells at this point… Pt 4 is WICKED for real.”
Just melting me, damn 💦💦
I know your girl reading this and has to know she sharing you with us 😝
You really write like somebody who ruins lives in the best way. 😈🖤
Talk that talk baby, I’m listening.
Pt 4 got me reading like it’s HIM talking to me. Whew!. 😮💨🖤 We been waiting Dammit
Guy, you supposed to ask, are you ladies wet yet? Ready to rub my panties on the screen hun 😂
If you ever speak in Atlanta or a book signing, I’ll like to be there. Follow back genieve88
Guy, use this to capitalize and opportunity, your engagement is up, start a poetry show.
Your play on words is crazy, I have so many questions. “Birdseye View”? Sir, please explain, are you telling her this the missionary I love you position when you’re deep in? OMG, I got so many questions.. Hands on her during making love, is this spanking, choking ? Please answer my questions. This is 🔥. My girls group brought me here, we in Little Rock speaking on you 🩷💚🩷💚🩷
I remember your BPW response, that need to be reposted immediately, fam love from Madison, KY
I’m so insecure, my man would wake up to a iron to his face, because why they need to know your thoughts?
My friend Kamaria from SA called me and said girl he wrote another one..
This ain’t a poem… this a soul-snatching experience sir😈💦
I’m team Guy, no one can’t say you don’t relate to us boo.
Hey, love from Birmingham ✨
You’re nasty asf, this is mild compared to the previous three, I bet you know your way around the pussy. The type that’ll drive a woman crazy. 🫢
Bro, got the engagement ⬆️ all the freaky women is on here.
The way you’re in my head, I definitely feel like you’re in my head, baby come home. And I don’t even know you.
I never met you but In my head you write this for me and you’re my writer, I want to fight all these bitches for commenting
Love from Jamaica 🇯🇲 Guy, adore your poetry.
I enjoy reading your poetry, very creative mind.